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I Love You
30 May, 2003
Author: Your Melody

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I walked by you this morning, and you smiled
I thought nothing of it, it was just a smile
If I knew what I did now two weeks, I never would've let it go this far.
Two weeks ago we were nothing but friends,
you and me until times end.
Two weeks ago it was just a smile,
A friendly smile, so innocent, so juvinial,
a smile that lasted only a little while
I know that you have lots on your mind, but I just wish I could help you find,
the right words to say what you mean, the right words to show me what you've seen.
I just want you to know, that I too,
wish I could say, "I love you."

------- Author's Notes -------

A little advice to any teenager thinking they're in love.
Never fall in love until you can handle the heart-break.
Once you can handle that, you'll be able to realize when
a guy/girl is just using you. Then you can dump him/her
and break his/her heart before he/she does it to you! Me
being only 14 myself, I wish someone would've told me
this before I "fell in love."

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Ems (152.163.253.5) -- Wednesday, June 4 2003, 01:04 pm

great

i liked this one! i can totally relate and i think that a lot of teens can. very well written...i enjoy reading your poems!
approcott (64.91.41.122) -- Tuesday, July 1 2003, 08:58 am

in the still of the night

no matter what happens, he will still love you. have faith girl
Your Melody (207.190.93.143) -- Saturday, July 19 2003, 05:59 pm

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I know he will. He once told me, never lose faith, and I never have
Your Melody (207.190.93.146) -- Tuesday, July 22 2003, 07:20 pm

My Bad

I contradict what I said on the 19, he'll never love me again, he's too busy with his "new girlfriend" the "love of his life"!
ym (207.190.93.26) -- Monday, September 15 2003, 01:33 am

in the still of the night

Your Melody? Why contradict yourself? You sound a lot like me when my ex broke up with me. The lesson I learned from all of it??? He's not as much of a liar as I thought he was. It's been almost 3 months in 2 days, and this whole time, he's never stopped loving me. Give the guy a chance to continue loving you. You'll be a LOT happier knowing that someone will always care...no matter what happens. Have faith girl!
 
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