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Why?
31 May, 2003
Author: Your Melody

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Last night as you put your arms around me
and I looked into your eyes,
I tried to make you see what I see
that makes it so hard for me to say my Good-byes.
I tried to make you look into my eyes, and see your heart and soul,
even though I knew my love for you
was starting to take its toll.
You asked me why I loved you
and here's what I had to say:
I love you because you're always there,
always loving and always willing to try and make things better.
I love you because you always give that second chance.
I love you because you're smile can brighten up my whole day,
even when the worst has only just begun.
I love you because I know you won't hold the past against me.
I love you because of who I am when I am with you.
I love you uncoditionally and for many reasons,
but mostly I love you because of who you really are.
So tonight as you put your arms around me,
and you look into my eyes,
I know you're trying to make me see what you see,
that makes it so hard for you to say your Good-byes.
I know you're trying to make me look into your eyes,
and see my heart and soul,
even though you know your love for me is starting to take its toll.
So I now wonder why you love me...
Why couldn't you just leave me be?

vinebar

Comments on this poem/writing:

no one important (64.91.41.122) -- Tuesday, July 1 2003, 09:13 am

wow!

it sounds like you still love him. if you do, do not stop trying. like you always say, "in the end everything is alright, if it's not alright it isn't the end." if you love him and want to be with him, you must tell him and not care about what everbodys says. it will all be fine, maybee not right now, but in the future. hey, at least you have something to look forward to. you must tell him that you love him. if you don't, forget everything i said and get out there and look for that special someone, he is out there. go and get him
Terrie (65.148.210.70) -- Tuesday, July 1 2003, 08:42 pm

DON'T LET YOUR HEART BE SILENT

TRUE ....TAKE IT FROM ME LIFE IS TOO..SHORT...IF YOU HAVE A SIGIFICANT OTHER.. DON'T BLOW YOUR CHANCE BY KEEPING SILENT..NO ONE KNOWS WHERE ONES LIFE ENDS AT THE END...YOU COULD BE CHEATING YOURSELF OF A BEAUTIFUL RELATIONSHIP...I BLEW MY CHANCE WHEN DEATH TOOK MINE AWAY.. NOW I SIT HERE WITH THOSE THOUGHTS THAT I CAN ONLY SHARE AT HIS PLOT..... BELIEVE ME WHEN I AM READY TO START OVER AGAIN AFTER 13 YRS.I WILL NOT STAND SILENT I WILL SHARE EVERY SMALL LITTLE THOUGHT & DETAIL WITH THE NEXT LOVE IN MY LIFE...I THOUGHT MY FIRST LOVE WAS MY LAST BUT...I KNOW THAT THIS HEART OF MINE CAN STILL HOLD ON TO THE PAST AND YET FOCUS ON THE FUTURE...IT MADE ME STRONG/WISE...DON'T STAND SILENT CHILD....GO BUILD YOUR DREAM....
Terrie (65.148.210.70) -- Tuesday, July 1 2003, 08:48 pm

LOVED YOUR POEM

I AM SOOOOO SORRY I TYPED AWAY AS IF YOU WERE SITTING IN FRONT OF ME....ANY WAYS I LOVED YOUR POEM...GREAT JOB...THAT SOME-ONE MUST BE SPECIAL......KEEP UP W/THE GREAT WRITING....
Your Melody (207.190.93.143) -- Saturday, July 19 2003, 07:07 pm

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Thank you Terrie. and Your right, in more ways than one. I know I shouldn't just be sitting here, while my life goes on around me, I should be out there having fun, but ur'e also right in saying that someone must be special, because he really is.
andrea (65.13.37.15) -- Tuesday, August 28 2007, 02:32 am

quote

who said the quote, "in the end everything is alright, if it's not alright then it is not the end" ?
 
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