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I'm Leaving
7 October, 2003
Author: XoForeverXo

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i dont need your bullsh*t
nor do i need your charm or wit
i dont feel like going thru it again
this is now, that was then

tho u think this might help us
one things missing, something called trust
cant EVER see things going back to how they were
feelings can only be described as a blur

its no fun
watching this fall all apart
so ull exist forever
but only in my broken heart

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Comments on this poem/writing:

nicole (216.162.82.50) -- Monday, February 23 2004, 04:07 pm

i knoe...

i knoe the feeling yuor trying to express in this poem and its not easy. i dont have trust in my realtionship b/c I lost it, mayb u should jus try again.
heaven (10.113.44.79) -- Monday, March 15 2004, 06:24 pm

wow...

Your a great writter!i love all your work!!and thank you very much for the comment on my poem's.-heaven
 
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