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Face To Face
23 May, 2004
Author: XX

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I stare in to your face and gaze into your eyes
and I think what you told me that i am what you despise
I fear that once I thought what you told me was true
But they were lies that you loved me,
-But you hate me and I hate you too

As I look at your wrist marked with double x
I think maybe a little deeper cut and I might rest
I made you bleed once before as you made me your whore

My mind, is mine no longer
The more I fight the more you get stronger

Maybe this pain will just pass
As I put my fist through the glass
What I see is now gone
But i carry you with me all along
For you to see what I seen was a reflection of me

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.116.12) -- Saturday, March 27 2004, 03:20 am

Close-up

Hey xx! Face to Face reminds me of a mirror. Looking back at yourself! Face to Face with one thing that tears us apart inside........yet please don't cut yourself for it....You're not the one to blame xx...
Have fun now!!
And......Live each day with expectation
xx (172.153.113.62) -- Monday, March 29 2004, 04:50 pm

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thank you for posting your thoughts
heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Tuesday, March 30 2004, 12:55 am

dearest Xx

i never knew you could write so well!!you have alot of talent!!i love this poem....it's so....real!!keep it up~heaven
Carly (216.77.204.120) -- Tuesday, March 30 2004, 03:03 pm

Deep...

Wow. That's some deep, meaningful stuff right there. I didn't know you wrote poetry, or so well for that matter. Just keep your head high and toward the sky. (I'm such a cheeseball!)
xx (172.174.161.117) -- Friday, April 2 2004, 06:20 pm

to all of you

thank you that was my first poem i ever wrote ... and chesseballs are cool
FoRsAkEn (24.237.34.114) -- Thursday, April 8 2004, 04:17 am

whoa..

wow this poem is really good..its lyke one of those that you can actually feel and see as you read...i lyke it alot..P.L.U.R sTyleZ
xx (172.135.161.119) -- Friday, April 9 2004, 03:22 am

to FoRsAkEn

thanx i am glad you like it ????whatsP.L.U.R meen??? sorry i am new to this
FoRsAkEn (24.237.34.114) -- Friday, April 9 2004, 05:17 am

its ok...

hehe its alright not many people do know...all P.L.U.R means is PEACE LOVE UNITY and RESPECT...words my friends taught me to live by...
xx (172.202.186.126) -- Tuesday, April 13 2004, 02:27 am

P.L.U.R

words every one should no and live by
 
Name:                                           Remember Me

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