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Vinnie, The Bum
12 July, 2002
Author: Zach

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The choice
spoken by one voice;
the choice,-
thought by one mind...
defined
and trying to figure out
why we bother crying
over things that ain't never gettin' better.
It's all written in the letter.
The letter,
written by one man,
a man that doesn't have a future,
let alone a plan.
I am a big fan of this man,
'cause he know where he's goin' --
nowhere.
His hopes and dreams
of better things to come...
all lost in the reality
of being a bum..

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Leah (66.222.217.200) -- Saturday, November 8 2003, 06:41 am

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lol funny poem but true I like reading your poems they are fun to read and different! Really thought out and true yeah thats what im sayin to you so come on speak whats on your mind get outa your bind and let your soul run free with what you got are you listenin to me let it be heard whats on your heart so that what you know can start a new out look on life forgoet pain and strife foloow your dreams be the best you can be aint no onw gonna stop you your runnin the race tryin to find some patiens in this world of ignorence ppl tryin to get fly barly notied with the tears they cry think why oh why is my life such a mess walkin the streets okay sorry lol i got a little carried away....i was just tryin to free style like you lol......keep up your talent
Mellow Rain (216.65.211.189) -- Saturday, August 7 2004, 08:10 pm

i dont think it was supposed to be funny

i wanted to be a bum when i was little. i didnt have to go to school i could take a shower when i wanted people give me money on the street. i could go places were they feed me etc. but ive realized that i have too much going for me right now. but when i die, what then? money means nothing you cant pay to come back. and working soo hard in life for money just to get hut by a falling bullet? why?
 
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