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I Sit Alone
9 March, 2003
Author: Zak

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i sit alone,
in this dark place,
not a soul, not a light.
i wonder how I ended up here.
i stretch out my arms,
and feel nothing, nothing but cold.
then I realise...
this is my mind

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Comments on this poem/writing:

SaRaH (81.78.73.247) -- Friday, March 14 2003, 10:46 pm

rar to u

tis rather good zak! *claps* stop being gd at stuff u mean mean person!
Mark Foley (80.225.12.253) -- Friday, March 14 2003, 10:46 pm

I sit Alone

It's a really inventive piece that only a great mind like Zak's can create. It makes everything seem lonely and that life has no meaning. Really good
MartinV (63.208.62.25) -- Friday, March 14 2003, 10:57 pm

I could "feel" the cold!

Zak,
Good stuff, few words, giving total effect. I could feel the cold and ALL that empty space. Clever the way you did that.

Thanks,
MartinV
Zak (10.37.66.116) -- Monday, March 17 2003, 11:25 am

To Martin V

Thanks, someone understands it!
 
Name:                                           Remember Me

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