My Little Crow
26 November, 2003
Author: Ben Laney
Little Crow squawking
flapping your wings
It thrills my soul
to hear you sing
Little Crow hopping
around the yard
You have got me
laughing so hard
Little Crow dancing
wild and free
The way you move
amazes me
Little Crow growing
before my eyes
Chasing rainbows
up in the sky
Little Crow blessing
from God above
A precious gift
for me to love
Little Crow flying
after your dreams
My Little Crow
you will always be
My Little Crow
For eternity
------- Author's Notes -------
This "Little" poem is dedicated to my darling daughter, Dylan. She thinks she.s such a big girl now. Little does she know....she'll always be my Little Crow and there is nothing she can do that will change that! Don't hold it against her, though...it's not her fault!! |
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Sarah A (82.35.78.42) -- Friday, November 28 2003, 06:45 pm awww so sweet. i dont have kids, i'm only 18, but i know what you mean. i have a little brother and a little sister and they both think they're so big and grown up. those are the best times though. its a shame it's not long before they really are all grown up |
| Ben (67.122.250.114) -- Friday, November 28 2003, 10:59 pm Sarah A, Thank you very much for your comment, I really appreciate it a lot! I am soooo glad you think it's sweet, and I am in 1,000 percent agreement with you on the growing up too fast thing! My suggestion is STOP giving them water!! Ha! Haaa! Haaaaa! Just Kidding! Thanks again! ***Ben |
| Terrie* (65.148.230.234) -- Saturday, November 29 2003, 03:10 am this is a rather outstanding poem...i truely liked it ....Dylan is gonna enjoy it a whole lot more....i know ya got some others..i can hardly wait for ya to post one for your other kids and grandkids...i will check in once in awhile.....to check out your postings.....Terrie* |
| Ben (67.122.250.114) -- Saturday, November 29 2003, 03:35 am Terrie*, Thank you for your "outstanding" comment, I truly am glad you like it, and yes, I hope Dylan enjoys it as well and is not TOO embarrassed! Ha! Haa! Haaa! And yes, there are more to come. So, thanks again for taliking the time to check them out, I do appreciate it! ***Ben |
| hay ben this your sister janis (67.126.234.3) -- Saturday, November 29 2003, 11:21 pm this is a very good one i love it and i hope you will find one for all of use some day.it is hard when they live and come back and go<BR>-your sister janis (snip) |
| Ben (67.122.250.114) -- Sunday, November 30 2003, 04:28 am Janis thank you for your comment, I REALLY appreciate it! I'm glad you think it's good. And, please, e-mail me anytime, but don't use this site to send me personal messages, okay? I am happy that you take time to read my little writings and I truly am glad you think they're worth while! Love you, too, Sis! ***Brother Ben |
| Dylan (76.102.203.153) -- Sunday, December 9 2007, 12:47 am Dad, your poems are so sweet, they always make me cry. I can feel your love through these words.I love you so much! |
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