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Within A Dream
17 April, 2004
Author: Tammy

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You came to me within a dream, and
whispered into the night. My
eyes filled up with tears, as
you held me oh so tight.
You wrapped your love around me, and
your soul became as mine. Together
we were ONE, if only for tonight.
How i've longed to kiss your lips, and
have your hands embrace my own.
I know this dream won't last forever.
when I awake you will be gone.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Moonstarshine~ (202.141.239.5) -- Wednesday, April 21 2004, 08:09 am

touching..

nice work.
Tammy (66.38.4.127) -- Wednesday, April 21 2004, 10:02 am

Moonstarshine

thank you for the wonderful comment
Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Wednesday, April 21 2004, 05:03 pm

Within A Dream

Hey Tammy! Dreams like this--------with just you and Prince Charming is absolutely wonderful! You take his hand, he takes yours, together you are unified in love! Doesn't it make your heart and soul rejoice? Hhahhahahha. I'll automatically give you a standing ovation on "With A Dream"! You see me standing Tammy? Hhahahhaha. Just joking! But good, graphic detail! I hope to read more of your exquisite work!

Have fun!

Meridian
Tammy (66.38.4.206) -- Wednesday, April 21 2004, 05:33 pm

Meridian

These comments has truely made my day, thanks for the wonderful comments!!!!!
John Foster (62.254.59.156) -- Saturday, April 24 2004, 04:37 pm

Dream on..

Well written words...nice rhyme...
Keep dreaming and writing...
Tammy (66.38.54.80) -- Saturday, May 8 2004, 09:20 am

Mr Foster

Thanks for your wonderful comments
hushy (80.6.138.109) -- Saturday, June 5 2004, 05:13 pm

great

great poem tam,you had me dreaming!
Tammy (66.38.6.76) -- Sunday, June 6 2004, 04:08 am

Hushy

Thanx for the wonderful comments, glad this poem had you dreaming!!!!
 
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