Cruel And Unusual Girl by Ben Laney

Caught in a rain
that was unexpected
I wasn't looking
for anything new
Baby, the last thing
I ever suspected
was that I'd run across
a creature like you

You're a cruel
and unusual girl
Such a cruel
and unusual girl
From one
moment to the next
I can't
begin to guess
wheather pain
or pleasure will unfurl
Ooh, you're a cruel,
cruel and unusual girl

I can hold you
close for a moment
then turn around
and you're not there
Oh, you're full of
unpredictable passion
Seems you always catch me,
catch me unaware

You're a cruel
and unusual girl
Such a cruel
and unusual girl
From one
moment to the next
I can't
begin to guess
wheather pain
or pleasure will unfurl
Ooh, you're a cruel,
cruel and unusual girl

Terrie* (65.148.210.156) -- Sunday, November 2 2003, 08:16 pm

OH..OH..
Good one Ben....how unusual is this girl? is it cuz' you haven't meet her folks? :) watch out for your heart my friend...piece of advice..steer clear..i wouldn't want to see it laying on a sidewalk all chewed up like chewing tobacco...Terrie*

Pamela (66.38.146.7) -- Sunday, November 2 2003, 08:47 pm

Oooooh!
Oh here she comes, watch out boys she'll chew you up! Oh here she comes, she's a maneater.....
Heheee - nice poem, reminded me of that song :o)
But yours is kinder. I loved this poem because it reminds me directly of someone I know very well......

Ben (67.122.250.227) -- Monday, November 3 2003, 07:51 am

Terrie* and Pamela, thank you soooo....
Terrie*, I am glad you liked this one, and I thank you very much for your comment, but your advice is too late to save me! Ha! Ha! Haaaa! This was written over ten years ago! Thanks again! ***Ben
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Pamela, thank you sooo much for your encouraging comment here. And yes, I recall that Maneater song, too. I appreciate that you think mine is kinder! Ha! Ha! Haaaa! I'm an unusual man, but I don't want to be TOO cruel! I really am trying to be good. Ha! Ha! Haaaa! Thanks again!***Ben

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