Squeezed
13 April, 2003
author: Rebecca Ditch-Hammack (aka Dreamer)
squeezing
the pressure slowly pushes
from all sides
part of me wants to explode
but I continue
waiting for just the right straw
to be pulled
releasing all that is built up
till I am no more
no resemblence of who I am
where have I gone
where is the time I need so
to regenerate, rest
I need some rest
but I can't sleep, no time
I need peace
there is none to be found
squeezing
till the last straw is pulled
and I just explode
into nothing
into little pieces of nothing
then I'll find rest
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| LinzAy (152.163.189.171) -- Sunday, April 13 2003, 12:44 pm Good writing Becky! |
| Jeremi (209.107.96.181) -- Monday, April 14 2003, 03:42 am I think that this poem has so much meaning to it, so often I feel that exact way! |
| luc (68.74.74.254) -- Monday, April 14 2003, 12:25 pm good writing dreamer, really good. it kept me attentive through it all.. and i love a some of those lines to use as quotes ..=^.^= great poem.. |
| Capricorn (62.30.217.106) -- Monday, April 14 2003, 04:10 pm I know just how you feel Dreamer, when tension winds you up like a spring and you cannot find peace...until the explosion comes releasing all those pent-up emotions ...and finally you are at peace and find rest. A well expressed poem. Hang in there it will end! |
| barb (66.46.230.179) -- Monday, April 14 2003, 05:09 pm dreamer very good writing I felt your stress. wish there was something we could do to help.I feel overwhelmed sometimes. but everything eventually gets better. Have a good cry. that helps me. take care and slow down becky. |
| Roy (152.163.189.171) -- Wednesday, April 16 2003, 04:27 pm Poetry words well put dreamer to understand Many times I just shake my head to remember who I am what direction I was going in |
| Roy (152.163.189.71) -- Thursday, April 17 2003, 03:29 am I go with rest and tommarrow will love and meet you refreshed |
| Vanessa (165.139.123.17) -- Thursday, April 30 2009, 05:56 pm I LOVE IT -N- U DI A GREAT GOB..!!!!!!!.. |
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