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On The Road With Me
6 October, 2003
Author: Ben Laney

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I got a hot propostion
Now, girl, hear this
When I pop my question
Oh, please, say yes
Honey, I've been thinking
You're a living dream
And I've got a feeling
We could make quite a team

Baby, come and go
On the road with me
We could put on a show
For the whole world to see
You can sing the la la
I'll do the ooh ooh wee ee ee ee
Baby, come and go
On the road with me

Now, I'll give you fair warning
Right here at the start
I'll wake you every morning
With a song from my heart
I'll look for every something
That will make you smile
And shower you with lovin'
Mile after mile

Darlin', take my hand
Hey, what do you say?
Let's find a solid gold band
And hit the the highway...ay...ay

Baby, come and go
On the road with me
We could put on a show
For the whole world to see
You can sing the la la
I'll do the ooh ooh wee ee ee ee
Baby, come and go
On the road with me

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.136.7.143) -- Saturday, October 11 2003, 10:11 pm

good one..... Ben

this is beautiful...your talent on poetry is so fine, it is like a road..it is endless...keep sharing with us..
Ben (64.175.69.211) -- Monday, October 13 2003, 02:41 am

Thank you, Terrie*.......

Thank you, Terrie* for your comment! I appreciate your encouraging words sooo much! I'm glad you think this one is good! Thanks again! ***Ben
Pamela (66.38.146.7) -- Monday, October 13 2003, 04:15 pm

Ben......

Okay, as usual your poem is amazing, but here's the thing that really hit me - if a guy woke me up every morning with a song from his heart I would marry him then and there! Your way with words are great Ben, please never stop writing these wonderful songs/poems.
Ben (64.175.69.211) -- Monday, October 13 2003, 11:11 pm

Thank you, Pamela! I appreciate....

Thank you, Pamela! I appreciate your comment VERY much! I really am glad that you enjoy my writings. I am grateful that you took the time to share your kind words. And I hope you find a great guy to marry who'll wake you every morning with a song from his heart! Thank you again, sooo much! ***Ben
 
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