As He Sleeps
25 December, 2001
author: Rebecca Ditch-Hammack (aka Dreamer)
He lies there sleeping, unknowing
The meaning his love brings to my life
The warmth in my heart makes me smile
As I love him unconditionally
I watch him sleeping beside me
I lean over close to his ear
"I Love you so much" I say quietly
"I love you too" he sleepily replies
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Kimberly (205.188.200.148) -- Tuesday, August 13 2002, 01:52 am Nice and simple and wonderfully written. beautiful poem. |
| ashley (198.234.255.231) -- Monday, January 13 2003, 04:47 pm this poem tells what the man was thinking before he died. it also gives more essence in your life!!! THANK-YOU for your time |
| ashley (198.234.255.231) -- Monday, January 13 2003, 04:49 pm this poem is showing aa reflection of her childs life |
| Dreamer (Becky) (63.75.26.86) -- Tuesday, January 14 2003, 06:48 am Try again .... I love how a poem can mean something different to different people when they read it. It is about my husband and he is very much alive :) |
| Martin Vann (67.28.93.197) -- Saturday, February 22 2003, 11:14 pm Becky, I was acturlly, trying to see if, you had presented your beautiful song, House Of Mirroos," when I saw, As He Sleeps. , As He Sleeps. As you know, I wrote a poem called, "Even As She Sleeps," when I read this I thought, love is truly, a universal language! Without saying, I think my sleeping angel, is prettier, than you sleeping warrior, but in the end, love is the same. I know how you felt then when you wrote this and how you feel now, as best I can, for the now part, anyway. MartinV |
| c.r. (208.254.109.22) -- Thursday, April 3 2003, 08:46 pm aaww what a beautiful poem!! |
| Raul (208.254.109.22) -- Monday, April 14 2003, 04:22 pm this is truely a beautiful poem, this happen a couple of times in my life. I would tell her i love her when she was sleeping, and she would say it back while she was sleeping.Great poem, its really romantic and it shows alot of emotional feelings, Great poem! |
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