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Grandma's Goin' Dancin'
3 October, 2003
Author: Ben Laney

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Grandma's got on
A shiny new dress
Grandpa's decked out
In his Saturday best
Excitement is mounting
In the air
Grandma and Grandpa
Are goin' somewhere!

Grandma's goin' dancin'
Grandpa's goin' dancin', too
They're gonna swing and jitterbug
Till they cut the rug clean clear through
You whippersnappers watch and learn,
Respect your elders and give 'em some room
Grandma's goin' dancin'
Grandpa's goin' dancin', too

Grandma's grinnin'
Like the Cheshire Cat
Grandpa's eyes are twinklin'
Under his hat
They both look happy
Enough to bust
Grandma and Grandpa
Are gonna raise some dust

Grandma's goin' dancin'
Grandpa's goin' dancin', too
They're gonna swing and jitterbug
Till they cut the rug clean clear through
You whippersnappers watch and learn,
Respect your elders and give 'em some room
Grandma's goin' dancin'
Grandpa's goin' dancin', too

Hey, look at them spinnin'
Don't they make one beautiful pair?
Whoa, look out Grandma, Grandpa just saw
Your long-john underwear!

Grandma's goin' dancin'
Grandpa's goin' dancin', too
They're gonna swing and jitterbug
Till they cut the rug clean clear through
You whippersnappers watch and learn,
Respect your elders and give 'em some room
Grandma's goin' dancin'
Grandpa's goin' dancin', too
Grandma's goin' dancin'....
Grandpa's goin' dancin'....
Grandma's goin' dancin'
Grandpa's goin' dancin', too

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.208.25) -- Friday, October 10 2003, 04:36 pm

i like this Ben...

this is fantastic....'ay i think i saw your g'ma & g'pa at the dance club that i was at...and boy can they swing...i got exhausted just watching them from a distance..great poem Ben..
Ben (67.122.251.149) -- Saturday, October 11 2003, 01:41 am

Grandma and Grandpa both say....

Grandma and Grandpa both say, "Thank you, Terrie*!" They are pleased that you liked their "swing thing!" It wore me out just writing about those dancin' fools! Ha! Ha! I thank you too, Terrie*, I'm glad you enjoyed this poetic dance! I appreciate you letting me know you liked it! ***Ben
Capricorn (82.36.129.85) -- Monday, October 13 2003, 09:18 am

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This one really brought a smile to my face...I love it! Your description is so vivid I could see them dancing. Good to see the old ones staying young! A very enjoyable read
Ben (64.175.69.211) -- Monday, October 13 2003, 10:08 am

Capricorn, I thank you soooo....

Capricorn, I thank you soooo much for your comment! I really am pleased that it made you smile. For some reason, knowing that made me smile, too! I really do appreciate you letting me know that, and I am glad you enjoyed it! Thanks again! ***Ben
... (66.222.217.200) -- Saturday, November 8 2003, 04:35 am

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This is a cute poem about grandma and grandpa going a dancin lol
Ben (67.122.250.227) -- Saturday, November 8 2003, 07:33 pm

Thank you, Leah, for your....

Thank you, Leah, for your comment on this writing sooo much, I really appreciate it! I am happy you think it's cute and humorous! I am glad to know that! ***Ben
 
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