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Circle Of Mortality
5 July, 2001
author: Rebecca Ditch-Hammack (aka Dreamer)

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Mortality
tested, tried, true
loss like no other
emptiness, all the way through

Emptiness
gone with nothing left
heavy missing part
feelings, seek the lifeless void

Feelings
burning dark alone
churning angry hurt
death, appealing to my heart

Death
forever, gone away
no more tomarrows
begins, mortal empty feeling

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Comments on this poem/writing:

juggla' (62.7.78.205) -- Tuesday, December 10 2002, 11:36 pm

i like it

its like all that we do isnt good enough to surpass the world as we do it so fast we dont understand that in the long run its all going to end up dead...but only to the naked eye...in the aspects of the planet, when we die it all gets recycled around in an endless lifeless flurry.
rome (216.41.25.182) -- Wednesday, April 7 2004, 05:59 pm

this was corny

this peom did not make since. thank you!
 
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