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Racoons Are Rockin'
1 October, 2003
Author: Ben Laney

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Well, I bought me a snow-white drivin' machine
And, oh, I'd really like to keep it clean
But I live way back in the hills
And a pack of racoons live there, too
Now when the night runs deep and still
Do you you know what those racoons do?

Racoons are rockin'
On my hood every night
They leave their messy, muddy pawprints
>From the left fender to the right
While I'm in bed dreamin'
Under the covers tucked in tight
Racoons are rockin'
Racoons are rockin'
Racoons are rockin'
On my hood every night

When I get up each morning I see all the signs
The ones they leave when they're rockin' every night
Though I get the hose and wash that car real good
I know again tonight they'll be back on my hood

Racoons are rockin'
On my hood every night
They leave their messy, muddy pawprints
>From the left fender to the right
While I'm in bed dreamin'
Under the covers tucked in tight
Racoons are rockin'
Racoons are rockin'
Racoons are rockin'
On my hood every night

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.210.233) -- Sunday, October 5 2003, 04:30 am

totally cute Ben....

excellent poem Ben.. .cute poem..'aye how's the fuel supply on your wheels? did ya know that those cute little rascals like to go for joy rides :) keep on posting..it keeps me smiling :)
Ben (67.123.244.43) -- Monday, October 6 2003, 08:48 am

Joy riding racoons, Terrie*.....

Joy riding racoons, Terrie*, I guess are a real possibility! If they ever learn to hot wire my Mercury I'll never see it again! I'm glad this mabe you smile and that you like it. Thank you VERY much, I do appreciate it! ***Ben
Martin Vann (171.75.221.117) -- Monday, October 6 2003, 02:36 pm

Josophine & Jacque, Raccon Rokers From My Past

Ben,

This was a joyful poem, I could those rokers on your hood, and I'm aware on your moning mood. As a Kid, my dad was a hunter, one day he brought two baby raccons, Josophine and Jacque, the cold do a hood and a bottle of Jax beer in a nano-second.

Enjoyed it,
Thanks Ben
Martin
Ben (67.123.244.43) -- Tuesday, October 7 2003, 06:51 am

Martin, thank you for rockin'....

Martin, thank you for your "rockin" comment! Your encouraging words, as always, are GREATLY Appreciated.
And, yes, thank God these rascals don't have access to the beer cooler! Ha! Ha! Haaaa! They'd set these woods on FIRE! Soooo glad you got a kick out of this one. Thanks again, Amigo! ***Ben
john (66.144.34.2) -- Friday, April 21 2006, 03:58 pm

it was a great poem

i'm learning about raccoons in school and the PC wont let me coppy it to microsoft word it says pleas tell me if you want to use it so can i please
john (66.144.34.2) -- Friday, April 21 2006, 03:59 pm

that was cool

thank you mr.Laney
Ben Laney (68.127.144.57) -- Saturday, September 6 2008, 10:36 pm

Thanks John

Thank you for your comment John and yes, Feel free to copy it and use it as long as you credit me wit authorship!
 
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