You Absorbed All Of My Pain Away by Terrie*

I don't want you to...
feel the pain
touch the tears
hear my soul
as it cries

I want to hide this
soul that bares
the tears
of the pain
released by my soul

you shouldn't have to...
feel the pain
and the tears
from this soul

I simply can not let you..
touch the pain
that brought
these tears
into my soul

why did you...
listened to the pain?
washed by the tears
that cleansed my soul?

when will you stop..
absorbing my pain?
unleashed by these tears
that buried my soul
straight into your own?

now your soul
bares my pain
caused by these tears
i refused to share with you

Clive (63.184.97.216,) -- Tuesday, April 27 2004, 06:48 am

A true friend will always care
To take you're pain that I know not why,
To take the hurt away I'll try,
To wipe away many a tear,
This I'll always do,
I do this as you're my friend,
As a friend I'll share your pain,
Clive

you write with knowing and feeling,

Terrie* (65.150.170.65) -- Wednesday, April 28 2004, 03:54 am

Clive,
yes as i wrote this i felt the feelings spill out of my heart as the heavy load was removed.thank you again my friend for such a heart warming comment...Terrie*

barb (206.191.91.106) -- Wednesday, May 5 2004, 06:10 am

your writing touches our hearts.
Very heart felt writing.I loved it. thanks for your feelings.

MartinV (4.244.174.229) -- Wednesday, May 5 2004, 07:05 pm

Rain so cold, pouring down, upon her heart...,
Terrie;

You refuse to share your pain, unless you find someone, who can ease the pain, as only, poets do. Your cry is the bolt of lightening, screaming through the darkest night, and there you are, you feel alone. Cold and shivering, the rain and all its pain, pouring down on you, as you try to keep back the tears and fear, so cold, so all alone.

There is an ear, that hears from its very soul, as you feel the pain and think, it is your very own. There is a heart, that has been searching for you, for so long. Now, sit with me, beside the fire, we share in our hearts, you have my heart, I hear, all you have to say, you will never, know another, cold and lonely night, not with me, by your side as we share the fire, within one heart.

MartinV

Terrie* (65.148.214.201) -- Friday, May 7 2004, 09:14 am

Martin,
# 1.thank you for allowing your heart to share in my pain,
#2.for pulling me away from the cold lonely nights..
#3.thank you for your precious comment i value and appreciate it more than you could ever allow yourself to ever begin to know.....
#4.you already know....
Terrie*

Terrie* (65.148.210.63) -- Sunday, May 16 2004, 03:10 am

Barb,
i am sooo sorry i do not know how i missed your comment actually i do know ,ya see i wasn't thinkin' j/k..your comment was so annointin' thank you doll your the best..Terrie*

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