Stuck In A Nightmare by Seizure

I'm stuck in a nightmare and I don't want to care
I want to live a life, a life that's not unfair
The things I dream and all the things I've seen
Make me regret it all and wash my spirit clean
I never want to breathe again I never want to hurt again
I want to close my eyes and never feel this pain again
But nothing I can do and nothing I can be
Can save me from this hell, I'm lost in the sea

I'm all alone out here, there's nothing left for me
I see my life flashing but I've no guarantee
I'm never gonna change, but I'll never be the same
I feel I've gone to hell and I've touched the flame
But what can I do to make it all right?
What can I do to keep up a fight?
I'm a hollow shell that's just meant for hell
I fade beneath the waves as I bid farewell

LinzAy (24.27.237.195) -- Tuesday, April 27 2004, 02:30 pm

......
I was so excited to see a poem from ya in the new this week!!! yayness.....i love it btw!!!! Great flow...as always.
LYL

lonlyrockstar (216.54.14.84) -- Tuesday, April 27 2004, 03:11 pm

WOW
i feel the same way.. sadly to admit..i love this write and please don't stop writing.

Meridian (205.188.116.142) -- Tuesday, April 27 2004, 04:43 pm

Seizure!!!!
Welcome Back Seizure!!! You don't mind if I call you Seiz do you? You can just let me know, and I'll be mindful not to do it again. Whenever you're depressed Seizure, you can just think of that Judy Garland song, "Somewhere Over the Rainbow" in the Wizard of Oz movie!!! Meaning that, just when you thought your day would end with a storm, the rainbow comes out with the many colors of happiness!!! I enjoy your poetry!

P.S.
You do have something to live for Seizure!
I beg you, and I'm on my knees........please don't think of yourself less, than what you really are.
Smile Seizure, like I'm smiling! lol!

None other than,

Meridian

barb (66.46.241.244) -- Tuesday, April 27 2004, 05:48 pm

you have away with words very good
good to see you writing and posting.

Leah06 (206.110.20.2) -- Tuesday, April 27 2004, 11:44 pm

Seizure
wow, this was beyond amazing! It sounds like a song that you have created and sang! Its wonderful, but i hope you are alright!

Lots of love,
Leah Kendall

Clive (63.184.1.128, 2) -- Wednesday, April 28 2004, 03:25 am

Very Good
Seizure your flow is outstanding,
Felt this way many times before,
I'm sure that it will come again,
To smile is at times harder still,
To give in to the dark easy to do,
So take the light and make it bright,
If that does not work call me I'm here
great work

Terrie* (65.150.170.65) -- Wednesday, April 28 2004, 03:28 am

Seiz,
i love your creativeness, a highly motivated so well loved , it is so true that poems pulsate energy when it is an experience we confronted/battled, yours always seem to draw me in with such electofying power...great work sweetie, you never fail us and nither shall we, were always here...keep that poetry passion flowing .Terrie*

Martin V (4.244.174.57) -- Wednesday, April 28 2004, 07:55 pm

I know the place of which you speak, very well!
Seiz;

I have no words to offer, for you have already used all of mine. One thing I share with you, as proof, I have been there too, many times. Read, The Devil's Teeth, and best of all, no reply required, however, some assembly may be required, I hate those words, don't you?

MartinV
P.S.
Nice to have your pen back home, where it belongs!

Seizure (68.158.68.252) -- Sunday, May 16 2004, 09:50 pm

yeah...
LinzAy, thanks for welcoming me back after over half a year. I kinda figured no one would remember me, guess I was wrong.

lonlyrockstar, no worries, I won't stop writing.

Meridian, you can call me Seiz. Thanks for the encouragement.

Barb, I haven't stopped writing. I just stopped submitting here because they weren't "suitable" for the site (too vulgar and violent).

Leah06, always appreciated. Thanks for remembering me.

Clive, you took a little too much time with that comment (making it poetic). But it's appreciated none-the-less. Thanks for the encouraging words.

Terrie, I really appreciated your comment. Never expected anyone to say something like that about my work before...

Martin V, missed talking to you. You've always been there with perfectly worded poetry and comments... I thank you.

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