Final Tear
28 April, 2004
Author: Seizure
Sitting in his chair, as he cupped his head
His arm spelled a word, throbbing as it bled
It said, "I Hate Me," why? it wasn't clear
Cracks ran down the wall, more formed every year
He placed his blade aside, it glistened in the light
He knew what he wanted, to do late that night
Would he have the strength? Would he have the will?
Other than his heart, he sat very still
He thought of all his pain, he thought of all his trust
He knows he was always, viewed with such disgust
He knows his life is ending, he knows his life was spent
He knows it was wasted, he knows what it meant
He knows they wouldn't miss, if he went away
He can always tell, each time they betray
He wept for hours, his face started to swell
He slit his neck wide open, his final tear then fell
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| LinzAy (24.27.237.195) -- Wednesday, April 28 2004, 03:11 pm Wow, Seiz. I really like this one. Sad, very sad, but good! I'm so happy to be able to read your stuff! Be happy boi and call and say hi!! ~Lindsay LYL |
| RAYRAY (64.172.21.94) -- Wednesday, April 28 2004, 07:36 pm Hi, I read your stuff alot, but I don't really comment.... Anyways I just wanted to say this is really awesome, and I hope you feel better. RAYRAY |
| Terrie* (65.148.215.3) -- Wednesday, April 28 2004, 09:04 pm awesome work !! i agree w/LinzAy,very SAD but....Good!! .you express/speak/write for many w/bleeding hearts. your words are testimonial for many w/o a voice. excellent job..Terrie* |
| Rubyd (212.50.186.53) -- Saturday, May 1 2004, 11:24 am Nice writing, ending caught me right off guard, just how I like it!! |
| Seizure (68.158.68.252) -- Sunday, May 16 2004, 09:54 pm LinzAy, wow, you hit another one, two days in a row! Does this mean you have the internet finally? Of course not, you're at a friend's house. Hmm... I might give you a call tonight... but there's no guarantee you'd be there (we both know why). Rayray, thanks for the comment... I'm glad you read my stuff a lot. And no comment is ever necessary if you feel uncomfortable doing so. I appreciate you giving any of my writings even a 10 second look... I hope you got something out of them... Terrie, thanks again... I have one question though, what's the "*" by your name for? Rubyd, I appreciate it. I like catching people off guard too... |
| Terrie* (65.148.210.155) -- Sunday, May 16 2004, 11:08 pm 'aye sweetie, glad to see ya back.. the * just means that plain unusual me ,am 100% original not a carbon copy, phony or generic j/k....on a more serious note ...this is incase another terrie with the same spellin' posts comments /poetry that way no one gets confused . been thinkin' 'bout a tattoo of the likin' what do ya think? haha ..now go enjoy yourself an awesome day and infect some more folks w/your electrofying personality before daylight disappears..your friend in poetry...Terrie* p.s great poetry you create... |
| Seizure (68.158.68.252) -- Monday, May 17 2004, 12:24 am I understand now Terrie, thanks for clearing that up. |
| Xeracy (158.4.56.6) -- Wednesday, May 19 2004, 09:00 pm standing ovation!!! I haven't been able too cry for a very long time, but this actually got a tear in my eye at the finale. Beautifully written. |
| Seizure (204.251.81.2) -- Thursday, June 3 2004, 04:36 pm Man, i appreciate it. Thanks for the comment, it made my day... |
| jerry (66.144.74.6) -- Thursday, October 21 2004, 02:45 pm your poem hit me hard it even made me cry nice work u explain alot if u know this or not u helped me alot |
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