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Summer Dayz
3 May, 2004
Author: Heaven

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the wind blows through the tree's,
on a hot summer day,
and i begin to recolect,
as children how we would play,

i remember the summer,
when we became friends,
we played hide and seek in the dark and secretly held hand's,

i remember the summer we had our first dance,
i had to stand on the steps,
so i could hold your hand,

i remember the summer we all played red rover,
and everytime it was out turn,
we sent eachother right over,

i remember the summer ,
we went our seperate ways,
and though i miss you now,
i will always remember the.....summer days!!

------- Author's Notes -------

this is dedicated to my first boy friend:keith leslie.
me and him haven't talked in a long long time,
last i heard he was in reform school,
and he was really badly into drugs.
i miss him.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.136.7.168) -- Tuesday, May 4 2004, 05:13 am

Heaven,

this was beautiful...we never forget our first love..no matter what..because they are a big part of us, they helped make the best memories..
i hope you hear from him and i pray that he is getting the needed help to overcome the drugs..God Bless you ..thanx for sharing such a lovely poem..Terrie*
heaven (10.113.44.79) -- Tuesday, May 4 2004, 02:46 pm

terrie*

hi.you are very right....i just wish that things were easier to forget.i would love to forget many things.including people that have heart ,let and let me down.but i guess in a way its better that i dont for get the people that i once knew.cause everyone has really taught me some thing.like keith.he taught me how love.thanx again~heaven
Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Tuesday, May 4 2004, 06:27 pm

It's just like Heaven, Heaven!

Hey Heaven! I'm trying to chew my salad as I type! LOL! I love your poem on change entitled, "Summer Dayz".... I wish there was some way he could log onto this site and read your dedication towards him.... Recollecting your memories....Wondering where all the good times went..... I hope the electron space (negative space) gets fulfilled between you and Keith Leslie! Have fun Heaven!

Meridian
xx (172.128.45.102) -- Tuesday, May 18 2004, 01:13 am

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