The Ocean Tide
4 May, 2004
Author: Keith
The ocean is like a stream of dancers
Following the rhythm of the tide
Back and Forth
Back and Forth
Swinging Side to side
Always steady with the beat
Gracefully gliding on the shore
Feeling the pulse beneath their feet
One beat
Two beat
Three beat
Four
Dancing in the sun
Dancing in the night
Dancing forever to the rhythm
Always dancing to our delight
Never does its dance end
Or ever pause to rest
Always moving to the tide
Always at its best
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| LinzAy (24.27.237.195) -- Tuesday, May 4 2004, 06:41 pm I love the two different flows this poem holds. Almost as if to match the dance of the ocean! heh heh. Nice writing! |
| Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Tuesday, May 4 2004, 06:45 pm Keith, Keith! What's happening Keith? Nature is so lovely to write a poem on!! It comes natural to me to write a poem on nature, because I'm so fascinated with it!! ANd I love your description which makes up the lovely structure and artistic ability of your poem!! You can almost see an ocean rocking from side to side, and back and forth, as if listening to some music....LOL! Enjoyable work Keith as usual!!! Keep it up, and smile! Meridian |
| Tammy (66.38.54.80) -- Saturday, May 8 2004, 08:45 am WOW...love this poem, it's awesome!!!!! |
| SELina.. (124.104.194.169) -- Wednesday, September 12 2007, 12:12 pm wOOWw!!.. greaT onE! |
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