Brooke by XX

Creeping in back of my mind was her voice
What do you have to lose
To myself I think, my time
But on and on she says
Take a chance this might be your last
What have you got to lose
Take it slow not to fast
Remember what you lost in me
I will show you how I can set you free
Let me do this for you, not for me
I want to let you be free

So I did what she said because I loved her so
Because I owed her so
I know she would never hurt me
For at that time I thought to myself
Of the last time we talked, we walked
The way I felt free with her
And the way she looked like an angel
And the way she said I am not afraid to die
And I ask you this just once, please don't cry

Now I think over and over
How I didn't get the chance to say good bye
As I write this I start to cry
So I did what she told me to do
For if I didn't listen to her, my angel
I wouldn't have my wife.. my baby
Who are my life

xx (172.143.248.106) -- Wednesday, May 19 2004, 12:38 pm

this is about
this poem is about a freind that i didnt get a chance to say goodbye to you dont all ways get the chance to say it it picks in the back of my mind that i didnt get to say how i felt about her ...she was on her 2nd heart transplant she was young to youg she loved life a freind of mine done her wrong i didnt want to hurt her like he did i didnt want to show her how i felt because that if i would ever hurt i could never live with my self but one day i got the guts to ask her out that was the last day i saw her she is now wacthing over us all and when i first seen my wife i heard her voice in my head telling me take a chance and i did and because of her i dont no where i would be to day i no love hurts but if you dont take that chance you will lose a lot more . . . . . i wish you all peace love and dreams love XX

heaven (10.113.44.79) -- Monday, May 24 2004, 03:00 pm

xx,
i love this poem but i am never gonna read it again.now ill be crying all day.im sorry about that girl.sooooooo sad!!!!!i hate death.when it comes to some one that don't wanna go.like me and others like me are hoping to die every day.but we don't.and yet people who are begging to live die.its not fair and i am truelly sorry.~heaven

xx (172.139.22.209) -- Tuesday, May 25 2004, 01:59 am

its ok
theres no beed to be sorry shes in a better place and she is in no more pain but yes you are right the ones that want to live die and the ones that want to die dont... the way i see it is that you die when your work is done on earth some ppl might see the good in it but i am shure someone will learn from it ummm i hope you get what i am saying well i wish you peace ,love and dreams ttyl

sum1 (24.217.169.93) -- Tuesday, August 17 2004, 12:28 am

alwaiis there
this is a sad poem i mean dont have to cry the person whon lost her life will always be there rite by ur side no matter wat happens so always remeber just cuz you lost sumone doesnt mean you will forget that one special face well i wish you the best of life
R.I.P always n foreva Me ttyl

xx (198.81.26.73) -- Saturday, August 28 2004, 11:26 pm

thank you..... have we ever talked befor
yes i feel her when i need her the most she helps me thruogh my way in life i hear soft voice i feel her near me she with me allways as part of my heart is with her

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