Taste The Petals Of My Rose
9 May, 2004
Author: ShyHeart
The petals of a rose, so delicate and moist, for there had been a morning rain
Causing her heart, to bloom and unfurl, all her love, like sweet perfume
Without shame, the tenderness of all her heart, she offers, all to me
I kneel upon bended knees, to touch and feel, the fragrance of her heart
I remember, so many times, when I was alone, I painted her arrival
With the words of my heart’s dream, colored with the passion, I thought
I would never know, yet, there you are, a monument, to all my words
To my self I say, be still my heart, for you beat to hard, for what you see
I know some day, winter will come and take, you away
For me it has always, been that way, no rose, ever stayed
Perhaps, I request to much, from any rose, to stay would mean
You love me, as I love you, yet, winter, always came
My heart is strong, and I know there will come a day
Though ruthless as my passion, often seems to be, I will find
A bloom, in a quiet place, and hear her say, “my love
Is a strong as you, be weak, my love, taste the petals
Of this rose, upon bent knees, taste, the petals, of this rose”
“Before winter, takes me away”
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Terrie* (65.148.208.73) -- Sunday, May 9 2004, 11:47 pm i love this... you paint a beautiful picture of love.. the soul of my heart caught on fire.. as i read the beauty in your words your poetry posseses a unique one of a kind embracing quality... Terrie* |
| Tammy (66.38.4.253) -- Monday, May 10 2004, 03:40 am This poem took my breath away, this is so beautiful!!!! |
| barb (66.46.241.243) -- Monday, May 10 2004, 04:06 am If you want all the women on here to see what a nice sensitive guy you are, you did it with your writing. applause Martin very very good description |
| Martin (4.244.87.243) -- Monday, May 10 2004, 02:25 pm Terrie, Tammy & Barb, I felt a "little shy," once I read these words to myself, glad my heart stood solid on this delicate ground and most of all, that it meant something, to you all. Its good to feel this way, and share the touch of love, even if,it is but, a dream, I love to dream, don't you? Thank You, MartinV |
| Meridian (152.163.253.8) -- Monday, May 10 2004, 07:44 pm Martin Vann! The Superman of love! On bending knees, pleading to take his love by her hand, and asking, "may I have this dance?" Very visionary Martin! Almost like an enchanted dream! So descriptional! She's sure to taste the lucious petals of YOUR rose! DIVINE POEM MARTIN! Smile, Meridian |
| Moonstarshine (202.141.239.5) -- Thursday, May 13 2004, 08:48 am Its very beautiful ..touching.. |
| barb (66.46.241.158) -- Friday, May 14 2004, 01:10 am I noticed most of your writings are about love. You must of had a beautiful love once. hope you find it again. Your writings are heartfelt. |
| Martin Vann (4.244.174.75) -- Wednesday, May 19 2004, 05:45 pm Meridian, Moonstarshine and Sweet Barb. As I have said before, I'm just a guy, in love with love and I would never write again, if, you didn't feel my words. MartinV |
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