Magic Tree Way
11 May, 2004
Author: Ben Franklin
Stars twinkling,
magic and wonderment fills the air,
a bright lit carousel,
the child is frozen,
jus stands there and stares.
you see,
at Magic tree way,innocence is the norm,
we live the way we want to,
we dont have to conform.
At Magic tree way we cry because we're happy,
take my hand,
we would all welcome you gladly.
We have one rule,
and that is to smile,
at Magic tree way,
we dont live in denial.
We will fill you with inspiration and love,
we will look after you if you have just had
enough.
So go on,
give us a try,
come and experience life,
if you do,
you wont be afraid to
die
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Terrie* (65.148.214.58) -- Tuesday, May 11 2004, 06:13 am very magical ..this carousel of yours...at Magic tree..sense the feelin' of a paradise an experience so magical that all wishes come true..thank you for the elusive experience...had a great time..creatively written...look forwards to readin' more.Terrie* |
| hushy (80.6.138.109) -- Thursday, May 13 2004, 09:27 pm thank you so much for your kind words |
| Meridian (152.163.252.98) -- Thursday, May 13 2004, 09:50 pm Super great poem Hushy! Ahhhh..... "Magic Tree Way"! A place filled with love, friendly smiling faces, with people of all races, they welcome you with open arms, without criticizing your appearance.... This was very good! I had a similar dream! Excuse me hushy, if I'm a little nostalgic, I just loooove perfect dreams like this one! Have fun and smile hushy! Meridian |
| anonymous_redhead (70.249.67.4) -- Sunday, April 10 2005, 10:02 pm this reminds me of some sort of child-like dream world, a good place where people are equal. and i can eat ice cream a lot. sorry that was shallow sounding. bye for now! *anon* |
| Ben f (81.100.175.132) -- Sunday, April 10 2005, 10:28 pm Yeah it reminds me about ice-cream aswell when i think about it. thanks for reading. take care Ben |
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