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Anger And Hate
11 May, 2004
Author: Korie Poleo

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i hate this
my anger builds up inside
and i just dont know why
it kills me
they all laugh
i'm stuck in the middle
no where to go
no where to hide
i'm so lost
i'm so angry
but at what, i have no clue
people ask me whats wrong and i just blew,
how can anything be rightin a world thats always wrong?
sometimes i just want to sit
sit and cry by my self
but nothing will be wrong
yet nothing will be right.

------- Author's Notes -------

I wrote this when I was very upset at my family, and i am 14 years old.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Wednesday, May 12 2004, 08:07 pm

Korie!

It almost seems like your stuck between a rock and a hard place when you say, nothing will be wrong, yet nothing will be right.......
I know what it feels like to have anger....
It took me awhile to let things go and disperse....
But I finally realized, if i wanted to be happy, I had to forget about that thing that was troubling me, even though it was hard........

And when you say hate, I've been there a few times......
Especially hate for bullies.......
But, I have to release all that too,
instead of being one messed up sister.... hahha
Anger and hate didn't get me anywhere....
Everyday I was crying......
So I can relate to your title....

Lovely words KP! (have fun)

Meridian
Puddin 2 (208.63.114.185) -- Monday, March 13 2006, 09:01 pm

girl

wow just thin about it that's how ur life was when u were 14 now ur 16 and it's kinda still the same i wish i was around when u were 14 to help u out but i wasn't i love u KP more than anything!!
mimdy (205.188.117.65) -- Wednesday, May 17 2006, 10:32 pm

anger and hate

i think you are a really good poet.i love your poems but of course i'm not good as you are. you are very talented.
mindy (205.188.117.65) -- Wednesday, May 17 2006, 10:32 pm

anger and hate

you are talented
Gabrielle Harris (70.232.92.21) -- Saturday, September 30 2006, 11:46 pm

Asking can i use this poem for assigment at school

May I use this peom for my school project.
fdfh (75.59.138.19) -- Wednesday, October 24 2007, 02:23 am

my mind is playing tricks on me

can i use your poem
 
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