vinebar

Cutting My Knees
11 May, 2004
Author: LinzAy

vinebar

I'm crawling
Cutting my knees on broken ground
Falling
Deep into your sound

I'm reaching out for something that's never been...
You've never been there

I'm fading
Into this void inside my empty soul
Falling
Further into this vacant hole

I'm reaching out for something that's never been...
You've never been there
And I'm calling out to something that has never...
You have never cared

I'm crawling
Cutting my knees on my broken heart

vinebar

Comments on this poem/writing:

everett (209.240.207.43) -- Thursday, May 13 2004, 05:41 am

crawling

wow...what a poem. the description of cutting your knees and a broken heart was just awesome.
LinzAy (24.27.237.195) -- Thursday, May 13 2004, 03:52 pm

Ev

Thankyou!!!! :D
barb (66.46.230.147) -- Thursday, May 13 2004, 08:30 pm

oh Linzay

I like your style using words the way you do. Keep thinking how to use words. very good
LinzAy (24.27.237.195) -- Thursday, May 13 2004, 10:23 pm

oh Barb ;)

Thankyou so much Barb!!
 
Name:                                           Remember Me

Comment Title:

Comment / Ammendment:

Please complete the recaptcha below for spam prevention:

Click here to read other Poems by LinzAy

vinebar

Poetic Dreams Other's Poetic Dreams Submit a Poem New This Week Forum Home

Copyright©2017-1999 by Rebecca R. Hammack

COPYRIGHT NOTICE: All Rights Reserved.   No part of this website, including all pictures and written words,  may be reproduced or copied in any manner from this website without  permission of the original author of the work.  All poetry and pictures herein remain the sole property of the original author and/or copyright owner.  All poetry on this website has been submitted by the original author of the work. To contact any author of the work please e-mail: dreamer@dreamersreality.com  so the proper person may be notified.