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Big Dumb Guy
26 August, 2003
Author: Ben Laney

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I do not want to hurt you
I did not mean to make you cry
I do not want to hurt you
I'm such a big dumb guy

Girl, I care, care about your feelings
I do care, and that ain't no lie
Girl, I care, care about your feelings
I'm such a big dumb guy

I had hopes, hopes you would want me
I had hopes we might give love a try
I had hopes, guess I was dreaming
I'm such a big dumb guy

Great God, Great God in heaven
Great God, I just want to die
My blue heart's crushed to peices
I'm such a big dumb guy

Girl. I beg you, please forgive me
Did I step over some line?
Girl. I beg you, won't you forgive me?
I'm such a big dumb guy

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Leah (142.59.104.228) -- Friday, September 19 2003, 08:43 am

,,,

are u a country singer?
Dylan (204.189.14.7) -- Wednesday, November 26 2003, 11:38 pm

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Dad, that's sad. It's good, I like it, but it's really kinda sad.
Ben Laney (63.194.136.161) -- Wednesday, August 25 2004, 12:39 am

Dylan, it is a sad state to be a...

Dylan, it is a sad state to be a human being sometimes. That is so true! Thank you, Baby Girl, for your comment, I am happy knowing you think it's good, even though kinda sad, and I appreciate your letting me know. Love, Dad
anonymous (199.44.82.45) -- Wednesday, October 24 2007, 02:47 am

May i

My i use this for school??
ME!! (199.44.82.45) -- Wednesday, October 24 2007, 02:58 am

Can i use

Can i yuse this for my school poetry day and ill give u full credit?
 
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