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So It Was With John
24 August, 2003
Author: Ben Laney

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Once in a while
A heart comes along
With a burning smile
And from the inside
A ripple spreads out
And turns into a tide

Once in a while
A clown happens by
With a dazzling style
And you can't help but laugh
As merrily he leaves
Sweet joy in his path

Now we know sometimes
We must say goodbye
Silently, like a mime
Knowing that when a light shines
It's brightness flows on
Across ages of time

So it was with John
His spirit was a special one
He shined on everyone
And all too suddenly
He was gone....
So it was with John

Through his gift of art
He shared with us his heart
A glowing human spark
Throwing light in the dark
So it was, so it was
So it was...with John

------- Author's Notes -------

This one is for a performer and songwriter who is sorely missed by millions, and one who touched and inspired me, John Lennon.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Martin Vann (171.75.221.83) -- Monday, August 25 2003, 02:39 pm

Very good Ben

Ben,

Enjoyed this tribute, we all miss John so many others. I'm sure John is writing and playing new songs and that Bob Hope is thinking out loud his new jokes. One day, we will all be together and it will be a great time.

Thanks
MartinV
P.S.
Nice way to start a Monday.
Ben Laney (63.194.136.161) -- Wednesday, August 25 2004, 12:32 am

Martin Vann, John did write some good..

Martin Vann, John did write some good songs didn't he? Thank you very much for your comment, Vann The Mann. I really am glad you enjoyed this one and that it made your Monday better. Maybe you could give me lessons sometime on how to keep track of the days! Haa! Haaaa! Best Regards,
Ben
Terrie* (67.182.0.99) -- Monday, June 14 2010, 10:21 pm

SO IT WAS WITH BEN...

REST IN PEACE BEN...
Fellow Poets...yesterday we lost an amazin' man a poet friend a family member...whom had that infectious personality , never knew a stranger where ever he went...he brought us all tears of laughter tears of joy , today we mourn this Great Man , a super hero with the invisible Cloak...Benjamin Laney
11/08/1950-06/13/2010
you may visit his myspace page,
view his video-Ben Laney---Hope Against All Hope
at Youtube and at www.vimeo.com to watch his latest gig.. type in "Ben Laney"


Blessings! Namaste...Terrie*
Meridian (64.12.117.71) -- Tuesday, June 15 2010, 08:09 pm

Oh wow...really?

For the times he wrote poetry, he was a gifted poet and had the ability to make people laugh. I only knew him through his poetry, but rest in peace John.
Meridian (64.12.117.71) -- Tuesday, June 15 2010, 08:11 pm

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Rest in peace Ben
LinzAy (71.178.153.45) -- Thursday, June 17 2010, 08:35 am

...

:'(

Rest in peace my friend in poetry.
 
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