Freedom by Maranda Berkley

I stare into the light
Memories flooding over me faster than the speed
Washing out all unnecessary thoughts
As I struggle hopelessly to breath

As mush as I can get
No more than I need
I'll have thousands of images thought
Hundreds of life lived dreams

If I were by your side
If there were no walls or floors beneath
Would you look on through the haze
Would you close your eyes seeing me

Nothing in the world to stop this mess
No images in the world to see
No words to sing out
Nothing to make this forever be

Just hold me in your heart
Place me in your mind
I'll be so far for so long
But I'll be with you given time

I'll think of you each day flooded by the thoughts
I'll feel your lips pressing on mine
I'll fall asleep with time and hope
With vitality in my soul and unclosed eyes
I'll know I'm in your heart
With the thought you'll rest easy
Knowing you're in mine
Waiting
Just waiting for the day you're free

Sarah (204.33.39.72) -- Tuesday, September 10 2002, 03:53 am

I think it was good
I think this poem was good and it deserves credit. I liked the way the person wrote their words and placed them. Good job! I really enjoy this poem and plan on using it for a project in school. Thankyou!

Sara (12.238.192.34) -- Saturday, April 26 2003, 01:39 am

GREAT WORK!
this is really wierd, not the poem, but there's another sara that made a comment above me! they are using it for school too! haha! well i thought the poem was great, it really has a lot of character!

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