Black Lace Dress by Ben Laney

I saw her today
Looking fine
In a black lace dress
Yes, I saw her today
Looking fine
In a black lace dress
She's gonna be
In my dreams
Tonight again, I guess

I wanted to approach her
And spill out
What is in my heart
I wanted to approach her
And spill out
What is in my heart
I've been so blue
And mangled
Since we've been apart

She started a fire
That ten thousand
Oceans can't put out
Yeah, she started a fire
That ten thousand
Oceans can't put out
If you have
Ever been in love
You know what I'm talkin' about

I've been thinking about her
With ev'ry
Painful day that crawls by
I've been thinking about her
With ev'ry
Painful day that crawls by
I'm gonna soak
My pillow
When I get home tonight and cry

Martin Vann (171.75.206.129) -- Thursday, August 14 2003, 02:14 pm

I think we have all been there, Ben.
I could feel the pain in this poem.

Enjoyed the work

Thanks
MartinV

Ben (64.175.69.107) -- Friday, August 15 2003, 04:34 am

Thanks, Martin, for
Thanks, Martin for commenting on Black Lace Dress! Pain and enjoyment, ouch & oh! I'm glad you liked it and really appreciate your words!

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