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Deaths Chariot
13 May, 2004
Author: Heaven

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He walked away,
to deaths chariot,
and didn't say good bye,
he left me here so lonely,
he left me here to cry,

deaths chariot,
please don't leave,
i want you to come back for me,

i can't stay here all alone,
praying for you to bring him back home,

i hate it here without him,
i can't stand to live,
so please deaths chriot,
ride back by again....

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Comments on this poem/writing:

xx (172.140.125.176) -- Monday, May 17 2004, 01:00 am

good its realy good

great use of words
heaven (10.113.44.79) -- Tuesday, May 18 2004, 02:39 pm

xx,

thanx so much
love heaven
LinzAy (24.27.237.195) -- Tuesday, May 18 2004, 05:27 pm

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Nice :)
PoeticDemon (24.15.118.213) -- Saturday, July 3 2004, 07:32 pm

very very good

i liked it alot! great job, it rhymed nicley to ^_^

~James~
heaven (208.182.197.84) -- Monday, April 25 2005, 03:49 pm

dear poetic

long time,huh?thanx alot....i miss you
 
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