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Happy Anniversary Hun...
15 May, 2004
Author: Terrie*

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your smile radiates sunshine to my soul
your heart takes control
as you knew what you wanted in life
when you proposed to me to be your wife

your kiss quenches my thirst
always going out of your way to put me first
your love is very out spoken
never one promise broken

never playing games with my heart
on lonely days when our worlds were a distance apart
shared your love for me
so the world could see

no one will ever compare to carry such a trait
in you I place all of my fate
didn't care of what others thought
we lived for ourselves, sharing the pleasures it brought


a patient man you are
you illuminate as bright as a star
you are my destiny
with you I live out an eternity

I love you hon
you are my number one
I wish you you the sweetest anniversary that will out last
the many we had in the past

Happy Anniversary hon..
as i give myself to you
as we become one...
i love you...

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Saturday, May 15 2004, 01:59 pm

Glorious

Simply wonderful! "Happy Anniversary Hun", was dedicated in the sweetest words to your husband! So deep and heartfelt..... Every poem you submit is filled with all your love! (So beautiful, lol!) You have one of those super big hearts that's just bursting with passion inside for the man of your dreams and your life.. Very romantic and special devotion! I hope you enjoyed your anniverary on yesterday!!

Have fun and smile Terrie
Meri
Clive (63.184.0.4, 207) -- Saturday, May 15 2004, 03:56 pm

Beautiful

Terrie just by you're writings you can see you and you're husband had so much love between you, that flowed to each other no mater the distance, You manage to put so much love in to all you write the feelings overflow, Many times I have cried to you're works as those feelings you bring out in me. A soul mate you are,
have fun be happy and love a lot.
Your friend Clive
Terrie* (65.148.210.63) -- Sunday, May 16 2004, 02:42 am

Meri,

thank you your comments never stop getting sweet ..yes and yes when i first wrote this back then i enjoyed that anniversary and every other one that followed this one was # 12..have a blessed evenin' my dear poetic friend.i is still smilin' w/u.... the one and only Terrie*
Terrie* (65.148.210.63) -- Sunday, May 16 2004, 02:48 am

Clive,

yes we loved deep...together and apart..always somethin' new to expect..never a dull moment for 13 whole lovin' years..i am touched that you felt my words..did you feel my embrace the whole time too? thanx for the great touching comment..i definently am happy and intend to continue to share this love in me deeper and a whole lot more..than before...enjoy your evenin'...Terrie*
 
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