When I Die 2
15 May, 2004
Author: Scorpio
When I die
Will you look at me
The same way
As you did before?
When I die
Will you care
Without leaving anymore?
When I die
Will you
Still be there
Despite all
Of our hard times?
When I die
Will you lift me up
And revive these
Faded chimes?
When I die
Will you forget
All the times
We seemed to share?
When I die
Will you begin
To think
That I didn't care?
When I die
Will you forgive
All my faults
And all my flaws?
When I die
Will you leave
And begin a new life
That upon you dawns?
------- Author's Notes -------
This is the edited version, I just added some more lines. |
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Tuesday, May 18 2004, 07:19 pm Wuzzup Scorpio? Hhahaha..... Sorry, about misinterpreting the other poem, of the same title, "When I Die".... But, of course, you'll have those who'll care for you when you die, your name will carry on, and you definitely won't be forgotten.... Death is such a powerful thing. But, divine choice of words! P.S. And I'll keep shmilin, if you do!! Hhaha Alrighty then, don't mean to worry your patience any longer! Have fun! Meri |
| Scorpio (67.162.95.179) -- Sunday, May 23 2004, 02:27 am Nothing, how're you? And no problem, I do that a lot. Yeah, I suppose, though there are times when they make me second guess. It is, and thank you. Lol! Then I'll SHMILE! Heehee No problem, no one ever does! You too! |
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