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Cold Cold Girl...
17 May, 2004
Author: Jughead

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From what i could recall
I've known her for four long years.
Having known her was one of the beter things that has happened in my life...

Her innocence like a child.Her smile oh so pure... Kind and gentle for she was like a princess... We became friends, we would share things with each other... Spending time together was like such a wonderful thing to do...

I really got to Know her better in the third year we got close i could feel she had feelings for me.. Finally... i have had a crush on her for the past years since i Knew her... On that particular day i felt as if i was really her man... We cuddled and she leaned on me... Though she may feel it's NOTHING but at that moment in time when she leaned on me it felt so good i was so happy i was on cloud nine.. Her hair smelled oh so good... Having look into her eyes made me felt hot all over it was though she could melt me like a piece of butter in a frying pan...

But sadly i didnt dare to ask her to be my girl... i was afraid she would not accept me for her former one was such a good and perfect guy...

But now... sadly we are not as close as before, going out together seem like an immpossible dream for me... Recently i tried to get close with her again... Trying my very best to regain the position i held long ago but sadly to no aval...

Oh how i wish she would give me another chance... although i know it may never happen but i will be waiting, waiting for that one day when she would finally accept me again...

------- Author's Notes -------

She a nice girl and how i wish she was mine... My fair wonderful girl... I miss u deeply...

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Martin Vann (4.244.102.95) -- Tuesday, May 18 2004, 01:57 pm

Good work, clear,honest thoughs.

Jughead,

I enjoyed this read, brought back a lot of memories form years past, funny, how we sotre things in our heart, then read your work, which brings them all back,

I think from experience and I can tell you, the hardest part of love, is knowing it, but having it.

Very Good JH,

MartinV
dimples (202.89.42.181) -- Monday, January 24 2005, 09:27 am

aaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

that made me wanna cry!!! it was sooooooo beautiful. its obvious you reli care about this gal- and its just as obvious how pure your love is for her. your writing made me melt- i knw xactly how you feel- ive come soooooo close to that kinda relationship, but lost my nerve!!!! love your writing- keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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