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Days Like These
17 May, 2004
Author: Ben Franklin

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Fresh cut grass,
a summer breeze,
why cant everyday be like these?

A bird whistles a private song just for me,
why cant everyday be like these?

Someone said hello,
why cant everyday be like these?

Just seen a beautiful girl
whos done something to my knees,
why can't everyday be like these?

My friend has had some good news,
why cant everyday be like these?


God let tomorrow be like these,
please please please.

------- Author's Notes -------

the first couple of lines were inspired by this nasty weather in the uk, but it is quite nice today.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Clive (63.184.1.85, 20) -- Tuesday, May 18 2004, 10:48 pm

Just see and it will

Everyday passes like these,
If everyday was the same we'd forget to please,
If everyday was the same then excitement would not mean,
Everyday has it's moments just you see,
Very good Hushy.
hushy (80.6.138.109) -- Wednesday, May 19 2004, 04:44 pm

..........

tahnk you for such a poetic answer back!
 
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