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So Long, Silver Canyon
22 July, 2003
Author: Ben Laney

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As I was leaving
Out of Silver Canyon
Headed for Houston
To start my life again
I thought I felt something
Just like rain-drops falling
Falling and touching
Warm upon my skin

The stream was running
Down through Silver Canyon
Rushing and churning
Over the rocks and sand
And in it's reflection
I saw the horizon
And dark clouds rolling
Slowly over the land

I passed the cabin
There in Silver Canyon
Where she is staying
With the new love she found
And just for a moment
I thought I saw someone
With one hand waving
But I didn't slow down

Later that evening
Thoughts of Silver Canyon
Were weighing heavy
On my heart and my mind
As the sun was setting
On the road to Houston
I started singing
Just what I felt inside

And I sang......

So long, Silver Canyon,
Goodbye you old, dead dreams
My day's been slow in coming
But I know it will yet be
Stand strong over that woman
With eyes as deep as the sea
So long, Silver Canyon,
Goodbye you old, dead dreams

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Dino (67.26.89.20) -- Sunday, July 27 2003, 05:07 pm

I feel the music!

I feel the music in all your poems. You have a nice style. Good to start over again and leave those dead dreams. Keep on singing to us Ben Laney, I enjoy your poems. Thanks!
Ben (67.123.244.245) -- Sunday, July 27 2003, 07:45 pm

Thank You Dino for.......

Thank you Dino for your very encouraging words. I feel really complimented by your saying that you feel music in my poems. I am truely glad that you like them. Thanks again!
 
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