Thanks by PoeticDemon

It's the middle of the night
Theres no-one in sight,
your all alone crying and screaming,
No, this is happening your not just dreaming,
Your eyes gleam with fear and hate,
I'll give you some advice, dont let a knife decide your fate,
it might seem wonderful,
Hell it might even seem great,
but listen to my words, don't wait until it's to late,
This is my advice take it or leave it,
I've been through this sh*t, i've tried to commit suicide 3 times,
i'm glad i'm still alive,
i admit i did strive, but....
I thank god with tears in my eyes everynight i'm still alive...
and with my last breath upon my death i'll fold my hands and pray.

Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Thursday, May 20 2004, 01:54 am

Oh, how teary
Very emotional poem! I find myself on the verge of tears... I'm glad you're still alive, and that I'm able to see more poems from you.... I'm glad you overcame the wits of the enemy, by making the right decision....
Very good James!
I applaud you, for such lovely, lovely work!
I'm thankful for you!
Smiles
Meri

hushy (80.6.138.109) -- Thursday, May 20 2004, 02:10 pm

very moving
like meri,still gald your here,very deep indeed,freat work mate!take care much love hushy

heaven (10.113.44.79) -- Thursday, May 20 2004, 03:11 pm

wow!!im crying...
great peom.very touching.love ya~heaven

PoeticDemon (24.15.118.213) -- Saturday, July 3 2004, 07:45 pm

Thanks
Thank you for your comments i really appreciate them and i'm very glad i'm still here to.

love always ~james~

brianna (64.53.184.240) -- Sunday, June 3 2007, 05:55 pm

i understand
i know how it feels to want to die......suicide has crossed paths with me so many times im surprised im sill alive....this poem is wonderful and gives me hope...things can get better.....there is always still hope...you always find a way with your words or within the look of your eyes that things can always get better only if we all try
ohh i just read this and its like a poem too lol
but i meant every word of it!! talk to you soon
love always
brianna bananna

barb (67.58.193.65) -- Sunday, June 3 2007, 10:07 pm

good insight
I'm glad you realized that no matter how bad it gets.Suicide is so final. Never getting to enjoy the good that can happen in the future. If you like surprises than you have to go with the flow of life, to see what surprise life has for us. Good write and a good lesson to learn.thanks

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