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She Will Be Loved
19 May, 2004
Author: LinzAy

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She looks down at her feet
As his eyes try to find hers
It will take an eternity to reach her heart
But does that matter if he's willing to try forever

And she will be loved
She'll forever be held in the arms of his heart
She'll be held, forever, in the arms of his heart
And she will be loved
She'll forever be that constant tearing him apart
She'll be that constant, forever, tearing him apart

Giving in, proving himself weak though he thought himself so much stronger
As she pulls away from an embrace that was meant to last so much longer

He pulls her back towards him
As she just, again, pulls away
He feels his life begins with her
Though it may not seem that way

And she will be loved
She'll forever be held in the arms of his heart
She'll be held, forever, in the arms of his heart
And she will be loved
She'll forever be that constant tearing him apart
She'll be that constant, forever, tearing him apart

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Comments on this poem/writing:

everett (209.240.207.43) -- Friday, May 21 2004, 05:51 am

wow

what a great story. this poem has a powerful story that just grabs you and you tell it really well. great work!
LinzAy (64.12.116.130) -- Sunday, May 30 2004, 07:56 pm

Ev....

yayness! thankyou!!!!!
 
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