Left Blinded And Numb by LinzAy

I look out this window to see my world
And it's there
I'm just blind to it
-So blind
I stretch out my hand to feel what I've known
All I feel is glass
Cold and hard
-So hard

And a tear escapes these hollow eyes
These eyes that have forgotten how to see
These eyes that have blinded themselves
These eyes that have blinded me

I draw the curtains closed
And it's dark
There's nothing left to look for
-Nothing
My hands fall to my sides and I to my knees
How badly it hurts
To be so full of nothing
-Nothing

And blood escapes these fallen hands
These hands that have forgotten how to feel, how to be
These hands that have numbed themselves
These hands that have numbed me

Meridian (152.163.253.8) -- Friday, May 21 2004, 02:10 am

Such feeling!
Oh the depth of this masterpiece LinzAy! You've got talent, you've got style, you got it all! Can't no one touch your poetic creativity in the depression branch because the feeling you've beautifully described in this poem is awesome! Blind and Numb, whoa, such emotion!
GREAT! GOOD! SUPER DUPER JOB ON THIS POEM LINZAY!

Smiles,
Meri

everett (209.240.207.43) -- Friday, May 21 2004, 05:45 am

hey
hey linz,

Meridian is right, you got great talent. such a beautiful poem. emotion at its best :)

LinzAy (64.12.116.130) -- Sunday, May 30 2004, 07:55 pm

Meridian and Ev
Meridian......wow. THankyou so much for that comment. I wasn't too sure as to how everyone would think of this poem. Glad you found in it and felt in it what you did. Thanks for the read and comment :)

Ev......as always...thankyou. Emotion at it's best eh? I'm so happy. It took me a bit to get use to this poem....im glad you liked it from the start:)

MIRIAM (205.188.117.65) -- Sunday, December 10 2006, 05:51 pm

HEy Liz
this is really good ...you hav a lot of talent u should be a GREAT POET..TELENT

barb (67.58.207.12) -- Sunday, December 10 2006, 09:50 pm

DESCRIPED it perfectly
My friend is blind and this is the way he feels sometimes. Very nice.

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