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You, Dear Fate
19 May, 2004
Author: LinzAy

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Dearest Fate,
Please keep on in this direction.
You brought him to me...
And I to him.
There were so many reasons before for me to leave.
To just forget what time and you, dear Fate, had brought my way.
So many heartaches that caused so many tears.
But I ignored those reasons.
You, dear Fate, had made me ignore those reasons.
You had me hold him in my heart.
You had me stand by his side when all, even I, thought it wrong.
You, dear Fate, have me where I am today.
In love.
I looked past every tear that had fallen from these, now, shining eyes.
I looked past every flaw that could have been and was.
And I saw him.
I saw everything I love about him.
I saw you, dear Fate, in him.
I'm standing here with you, dear Fate.
After all, I'm standing here with him.
You brought him and I together, Fate....
Never have us part.
Never have us part......

------- Author's Notes -------

A week 22 submission...thanks Ev for the inspiration :)

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Comments on this poem/writing:

everett (209.240.207.43) -- Friday, May 21 2004, 05:48 am

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hey i read this earlier when you entered it in week 22. i really like this poem, its very good.
LinzAy (64.12.116.130) -- Sunday, May 30 2004, 07:51 pm

ev....

Tunkoo very very much Ev!!! :D
 
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