Laying There, All A Lone by ShyHeart

Laying there, all a lone, nothing but, her heart, to hold on
Then, memories, sweet, memories, the gift of private dreams
Began to cover her, as he once did, oh, sweet, memories…,
Sadness, turns to pain, the kind, that only, pleasure, can bring

Laying there, all a lone, once again, she becomes, what she was meant to be
The vessel of, and guardian, of all his love, his dreams, again, they, enter her
She doesn’t cry, yet, there are tears, in her eyes, but her heart, sings
Sadness, turns to pain, the kind, that only, his love, can bring

“Laying There, All A Lone”

mommie2bratsus (65.136.7.122) -- Sunday, May 23 2004, 05:27 am

M.Vann
beautifully written...felt the emotions...put me right there...but....now tell me, what is this all about? i'm a female w/many questions when i can not seem to understand or simple words do not penetrate into the brain of my heart.."just curious" to set a record straight...nothing more..i'm someone whom always wants to know

Martin V (4.244.93.53) -- Sunday, May 23 2004, 08:23 pm

Just someone loving memories in a sweet way.
mommie2bratsus,

This was a thought, about a woman's heart, and a moment from a dream she shared, with a real-life memory.

MartinV

mommie2bratsus (65.147.241.69) -- Sunday, May 23 2004, 09:07 pm

M.Vann
Thank you, for sharing your thought. it was as visual as a picture.

Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Monday, May 24 2004, 02:08 am

Mr. Vann, the man with the plan
Every poem, is like a map, with a lot of roads, and exits to take; such as love, memories, and every other poetic category you've written about.... I may not make much sense here, but your mind is always open, such elastic, and flexibilty you have---"Laying There, All Alone"... a female, longing for her needs to be met, her desires to be fulfilled, by that special someone..... Just remember a picture lasts longer whenver you lose someone, or if they moved away....
Another dynamite poem, with the explosives of poetic firecrackers....

Smiles,
Meridian

Martin V (4.244.87.211) -- Monday, May 24 2004, 02:19 pm

Meridian, Could Have Written This Poem
Meridian,

You know this poem very, well, suppose you have been down this road before. You saw all the exits and entry ramps, ignored all the speed traps and caution signs, tis you that have a flexible heart and read this poem, very well.

Thank You
MartinV

anonymous (208.254.109.22) -- Friday, May 28 2004, 03:57 pm

no title
wow, im speechless... beautiful poem, i love it

Martin Vann (63.185.64.86) -- Monday, June 28 2004, 04:35 pm

Anonymous, Thank You Very Much.
Anonynous,

Your comment means a a great deal, keeps the poet's spirit high, the pen wet, many thanks to you.

MartinV

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