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Without You
22 May, 2004
Author: Raul

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I don't know what I would do without you,
Because your love feels so true,
I love you in everyway possible,
Because our love is completely unstopable,
We stuck by each other through all those hard times,
But now its all worth it,
Because now your all mine,
I don't know what i would do without you,
When your not around,
I feel so sad and blue,
Your my one and only true love,
I'm thankful to God,
Because he sent you from up above,
I want you to be my wife,
Because Iwanna be with you,
For the rest of my life,
I thank God for all the blessings he's giving me,
Especially you,
Because I know we're meant to be,
I don't know what I would do without you,
But theres one thing I know,
And that's that I love you!

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Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Sunday, May 23 2004, 04:00 am

Raul

This is so cute, so beautiful! "Without You"----- I enjoyed your verses, and your sincerity and how you describe the way she makes you feel! Gives you chills up your spine, doesn't she? Again, great poem Raul!

Smiles,
Meri
Raul (165.111.2.49) -- Tuesday, May 25 2004, 05:52 pm

Thank you

Thank you for your comment, this poem really expresses a lot of my feelings, im glad that you liked it. Thank you again.
 
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