I'm Loving You More
12 July, 2003
Author: Ben Laney
Rolling over one-fifty-two
Sunset sky red, gold and blue
Under a rising crescent moon
My heart is flying straight for you
This highway's packed with trucks and cars
It's been hard driving to get this far
I see the night's first silver star
And I want to be where you are
I'm going back the same way I came
Like a moth headed for your sweet flame
I want to hear you calling my name
Say in my ear that you feel the same
I'm loving you more with each day
Loving you more in each and every way
If I were a poet my poem would say
I'm loving you more,
I'm loving you more each day
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| ~Leah~ (142.59.104.228) -- Thursday, September 25 2003, 04:17 am I really liked this poem it said alot! |
| Ben (64.175.70.213) -- Thursday, September 25 2003, 05:41 am Leah, I thank you for reading my work and commenting on it, I really appreciate your encouragement and I am pleased that you like this one! Thanks again! |
| Pamela (66.38.146.173) -- Thursday, September 25 2003, 06:17 pm Beautiful as always Ben. I especially liked your analogy of a moth to a flame. Very sincerely written. |
| Ben (64.175.70.213) -- Thursday, September 25 2003, 07:06 pm Pamela, I appreciate your comment VERY much! I am pleased that you liked it and took the time to let me know. Thank you sooooo much for your encouraging words! |
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