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Leave Me As I Was
23 May, 2004
Author: Terrie*

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tell me
no lies
I have no
tears to share
I'm beat
can not stand
another defeat
love me deep
or leave me as I was
leave this heart untouched
to tend to its own
wounds in blood
the tears that flow
from it's very own soul
love me
or.....
leave me
as I
was....
untouched
and..
unloved..

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Clive (63.184.0.107) -- Sunday, May 23 2004, 04:59 pm

Always be open to love

To love you will be easy to do,
To care night and day I will,
My first thoughts are of you,
My last are about me reading your lines,
To know you this I see,
In all you let me read,
Hugs Clive
Meridian (152.163.253.8) -- Monday, May 24 2004, 12:04 am

I feel you

Heartbroken, and so many words unspoken from a Mr. Right longing to complete you.... It might be worth the wait in the long run too.... So many times, others rush into love, and breakup or divorce.... (Not saying you do TR!) But, untouched and unloved they should leave you, so you won't have to cry again.... For if they do, you have a whole lot of support on this website, who'll be happy to defend for you! Hhhahhaha....
Let's show a bit of teeth on that one....
Alrighty then
Smiles,
Meri
Terrie* (4.182.138.58) -- Monday, May 24 2004, 01:10 am

Clive,

thank you sooo much , you always manage to win my heart w/your sweet words..i am.... keeping myself open for love..hugs to you, Terrie*
Terrie* (4.182.138.58) -- Monday, May 24 2004, 01:16 am

Meri, Meri, my dear inspirational friend Meri....

absolutely i know that if i was ever in need of a shoulder or an extra ear i'd find them all right here..these were just some emotions i laid out there incase i do find love..again after 13 years..been out of the game but i know whats at bat..thank you..you always touch my heart w/such caring comments..thank you (sniff...sniff)Terrie*
 
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