The Moon's In The Right Place
12 July, 2003
Author: Ben Laney
The planets are right on course
Up in space where they belong
The stars are shining full force
Night-birds are singing our song
On a still night like this
A heart could just overflow
Oh, baby, isn't it bliss
To have each other to hold?
All the world is asleep
And that's perfectly alright
That leaves just you and me
To share this sweet lover's night
Baby, come over here,
Lay your head right next to mine
Because to my heart it's clear
This is the right place and time
The moon's
In the right place
Shining softly
On your bright face
And we can make love
At our own pace
The moon's
In the right place
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Enchantress (204.32.65.217) -- Sunday, July 20 2003, 07:55 pm I really loved this poem, especially because it involves topics I most love to write about myself, Love, and the Moon. Beautiful Poem, I wouldn't have changed a thing! I mean that!:) |
| Ben (67.123.244.245) -- Friday, July 25 2003, 06:17 am Thank you for your nice comment, Enchantress. I am really pleased that you like this poem! Your feedback is much appreciated!! |
| Cheryl (80.6.241.120) -- Saturday, August 2 2003, 11:34 pm Very good poem about a very sweet moment. I've had a couple of dreams about the moon lately hence the comment title. Well done, Ben! (re my poem Old Car, New Car... it's about two people...) |
| Ben (67.123.244.245) -- Sunday, August 3 2003, 04:29 am Thank you, Cheryl, for your very nice comments on my poems! Yeah, the moon has made it's way into several of my writings. Your words are encouraging and I do sooo appreciate them! For all your comments, Thanks!! |
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