These Feelings Inside by Raul

The day I saw you,
I was just blown away,
Because you were the most beautiful girl I've seen,
And your presence alone had made my day,
At first I was scared to love,
Cuz I was hurt in the past,
But you showed me a different side,
And now we're together at last,
You make me feel good,
In every way possible,
And when I'm in a sad mood,
You do the undesirable,
When your in my arms,
I sheild you from danger,
But when we are apart,
I feel like a stranger,
We have been through so much,
For example arguements,
But it was all worth it,
Because now we have our own apartment,
I will always love you,
Till the day that I die,
Day in and day out,
I will always try,
So what I want you to know,
Is that I love you so much,
I'm thankful to God I found you,
Cuz now I feel you in my touch,
No matter what happens,
I will never leave your side,
I hope we will always be together,
So we can always ride.

Meridian (152.163.253.8) -- Tuesday, May 25 2004, 08:21 pm

I feel the vibe
Hey Raul! Another outstanding, marvellous poem! You have feelings inside that are ready to come out and expose themselves to the girl who shaped you into becoming a man! Very good Raul!
And the last line, "So we can always ride"----- ride in your Expedition on the freeway! (hahhaha)

Smiles,
Meri

Raul (24.167.116.112) -- Wednesday, May 26 2004, 09:45 pm

Thank you again
thank you again, i'm really glad that you like my poems, there is a girl that i like but im just not ready to let her know. But thank you again!

crystal (208.254.109.22) -- Friday, May 28 2004, 03:27 pm

thats cool
so you like this girl?

Raul (24.167.116.112) -- Friday, May 28 2004, 04:48 pm

Crystal.....
Yes I like this girl, this is the first poem that I wrote for this girl, the second poem is called, "This Girl".

Sara (216.39.188.249) -- Tuesday, June 1 2004, 08:50 pm

yes im here to bother u again! =D
magnificent peom! altho i dun think i should say it cuz u probably know that all ur poems are great! you know how to express ur feelings in ur poems so that they jump out to the reader. love is one of the greatest feelings

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