Cold Cold Gal... Part 2
27 May, 2004
Author: Jughead
Today turned out to be one fine day after all
She smiled at me...
MY darling sweetie...
Her smile which i had long to see...
Red supple lips...
Black long hair...
Tan and sporty that's what i can say about her...
Though she's not the prettiest girl alive
nor the sexiest gal ever but having seen her would satisfy me...
Contented she makes me...
I saw her today after school she was in the hall...
We talked..
It was brief but to me it was enough...
I would like to continue but she didnt seem interested...
Indeed she is a very cold gal...
How did our relationship became like this...
Dull and boring...
Oh her smile is so beautiful...
Mesmerizing...
Simply captivating...
Her laughter sounded oh so nice...
pleasant...
Being with her is like an honour..
An unfufilled dream coming true...
Oh how i really really wish that somehow someday
she would just talk to me or be close to me...
again...
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Friday, May 28 2004, 07:10 pm What's up Jughead? The way your words just flow, and the way your submission stands out, as if it has legs...it's all amazing.... Just her presence makes you smile, and makes your day! I'm glad to hear that you're happy Jughead! Again, an amazing poem! Smiles, Meridian |
| sha (218.186.35.52) -- Monday, May 31 2004, 01:58 pm this is my fav above all.. noe y? cuz its neat... haha.. kk actualli i like this cuz i can kinda feel what u're feeling... not bad. |
| dia (218.186.38.138) -- Thursday, October 7 2004, 10:14 am yi s! di here...hey..i did'nt noe u wrote such beautiful poems! that girl sure is lucky. all the best in wooing yr lovely princess! |
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