You Said
28 May, 2004
Author: Raul
It was that one Saturday night,
You said it was a mistake,
But what you ended up doing,
Put frosting on the cake,
You said you cant remember,
You said he took advantage of you,
But how can that be?
When he ended up on top of you,
You knew I loved you,
I would give my life for you,
But you made that huge mistake,
And now the two of us are through,
I cant believe you did this,
I never saw this side of you,
I didnt think you were this type of person,
Now I dont know what I'm gonna do,
You said you were really sorry,
You didnt mean to do what you did,
But how can you expect me to forgive you?
Thats something really big,
I never thought this would happen,
You knew I trusted you,
I guess you didnt love me,
There was no feelings inside of you,
You said he didnt wear any protection,
And I asked if you were pregnat,
You said you didnt know,
You would have to go and get tested,
I know I cant trust you no more,
So I guess this is it,
Good luck to the both of you,
So now I'm done with this.
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| anonymous (208.254.109.22) -- Friday, May 28 2004, 03:36 pm it's really sad that this happened to you but if she really loved you then she did mean that she's sorry and I bet that she feels horrible cause I now how it feels to lose someone you love alot, forgive her! |
| Raul (24.167.116.112) -- Friday, May 28 2004, 04:45 pm I dont think I could ever forgive her, she hurt me really bad. But thank you for putting your comment up. |
| Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Friday, May 28 2004, 07:24 pm Hey Raul! It's me again Meridian! And you're welcome, when you said "Thank you so much! But, I believe you have an extraordinary taste for poetry writing, lyrics, and what have you! To me your poems are great, and meaningful.... When you said you didn't think your poems were that great......Oh, but they are!..... You have those poems, like drama movies...... Hungry for more, and more, of your script.... About love, friendship, trust, betrayal----all wrapped up in one! I am deeply saddened and sorry about what happened to you.... This is definitely heartbreak, when someone in whom you trusted, and believed in, had another personality, and another side..... Through it all, Continue to look for that rainbow When your spirits get a little down Keep smiling Raul, Meridian |
| Raul (205.188.116.200) -- Friday, May 28 2004, 11:07 pm I don't think I can thank you enough for the GREAT feedback and incridible responses that I have received from you. I'm glad that you like my poems, I love the way you compared my poems to dream movies. You really put a smile on my face. Thank you so much! |
| Sara (216.39.188.249) -- Tuesday, June 1 2004, 08:23 pm i know how u must feel and she really crossed the line but if she luved u a lot then she must feel terrible of wut she did and maybe its a good idea to see if it realy was a mistake u know...maybe he forced her, i bet it was hard for her to tell u. i hope u can forgive her |
| Little Sis (24.174.184.35) -- Saturday, July 10 2004, 06:48 am Hey Raul you never told me about this one bro, but you know you always have me here. Love yah much. |
| Raul (12.36.116.208) -- Friday, May 6 2005, 11:08 pm I hope you forgave her. Life's to short |
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