This Girl by Raul

This girl that I see,
Is as beautiful as can be,
I see her everyday,
And she looks so perfect in every possible way,
She also has these beautiful glazing eyes,
I would always stare at them when she would pass me by,
This girl always seems so perfect,
I wish I could just let her know it,
Everytime that she passes by,
I always seem to blush and turn shy,
Every single time that I see her,
I seem to get hot and catch an amazing fever,
I want to tell her so many things,
But when I see her I always seem to freeze,
Theres one thing that I'm afraid of,
And thats that she wont see what my feelings are made of,
I would really love it if she ended up as my girlfriend,
So we can be together until the end,
I really seem to like this girl,
And she seems to really rock my world,
Shes like this one and only beautiful queen,
I never thought I would find such a beautiful girl at just 16,
I love the way she walks with those beautiful hips,
And I'm just dying to feel those glamering lips,
This girl just seems so amazing,
The first day I saw her all my sadness was set a blazing,
This girl shines like a beautiful bright light,
I think about her all day and all night,
This girl that I speak of is just so beautiful,
This girl that I speak of just happens to be you!

anonymous (208.254.109.22) -- Friday, May 28 2004, 03:31 pm

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who's this girl, does she mean alot to you... well that's a stupid question, of course she does, i mean, she means enough to you to write a poem about her right?

Raul (24.167.116.112) -- Friday, May 28 2004, 04:46 pm

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Yes this girl means a lot to me, I've liked her for a while now. I really wanna get with her but she dosen't know that I like her. I wrote this poem to express my feelings towards her, thank you for your comment.

Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Friday, May 28 2004, 06:49 pm

Shining Star
Hello Raul! Another brilliant poem you've submitted! About a girl who you want to meet, but afraid, because she makes you weak.... She probably feels the same for you, but doesn't want you to know..... We'll never know Raul!

She probably dreams about you and everything!
Smile Raul
Meridian

Raul (24.167.116.112) -- Friday, May 28 2004, 07:10 pm

Thank You
I am really amazed at the response that I am getting back from you Meridian. I would always think that my poems weren't that good, but now that you give me all this good feedback I feel really good about my poems. Thank you so much!

Sara (216.39.188.249) -- Tuesday, June 1 2004, 08:16 pm

Raul
hey raul, i really liked ur poem it was gr8. keep it up n dun give up on luv, someday she'll c how much u like her. or like meridian said, she might already feel the same way but like u, she is shy to let u know. once again nice poem!! :D

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