I'm Sorry
14 February, 2003
Author: Heaven
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im sorry i hurt you,im sorry you cried,im sorry i left you and didnt stand by your side,im sorry our life didnt turn out right, |
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Clive (65.177.232.61,) -- Sunday, February 15 2004, 06:42 pm I wish this was the feelings of the girl that left my life. You did so well in writing this, geart work |
| heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Monday, February 16 2004, 04:17 am clive,im sry about that gurl that u speak of.i really am.thank u very much 4 reading my poem. -heaven- |
| Tammy (66.38.6.124) -- Monday, February 16 2004, 06:33 am Good work, This poem was very touching. Keep up the writing!! As I always say may the Angels watch over you everyday!!!! |
| heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Tuesday, February 17 2004, 10:59 pm tammy thanx very much |
| Jay (211.27.131.63) -- Wednesday, February 18 2004, 05:09 pm trully a gift how certain people can touch us so deeply! great job heaven i must say! only a handful of other writers have this great ability u do! keep it up and look 4ward to reading more of your future work |
| HEAVEN (10.113.44.109) -- Wednesday, February 18 2004, 06:23 pm thank u very much jay.thats really nice of you.i must say that i really like this site,ther so many nice ppl.i guess this is wher all the kind ppl. hide.thanx again-heaven- |
| bench (192.168.0.172) -- Thursday, February 19 2004, 06:31 am i like the twist - "sorry, i died!" this is a great poem! |
| heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Friday, February 20 2004, 12:29 am thank you very much bench |
| ashley robertson (170.211.169.37) -- Friday, February 20 2004, 05:37 pm This poem you wrote had alot of feeling I liked it alot. But you should never be sorry to pass life away if you were saved living with God no heart act no more pain God takes it all away. The love ones you leave should open there eyes to see in heaven is a great place to be. |
| heaven (10.113.44.112) -- Friday, February 20 2004, 06:19 pm thank u very much that was very kind of you........thanx again,heaven |
| PoeticVamp (24.15.118.213) -- Friday, February 20 2004, 11:44 pm Great poem Heaven, hope to read more, I Love You! |
| heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Saturday, February 21 2004, 01:26 am thanx alot and i love u very much 2. |
| Mark (66.75.77.195) -- Saturday, February 21 2004, 02:19 am Hey when you feel pain I'm here to listen ok! IM me when you need me ok! |
| heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Saturday, February 21 2004, 02:19 am thanx alot and i will remember that |
| lester (208.54.197.118) -- Saturday, February 21 2004, 02:26 am this was a bad ass poem |
| lester (208.54.197.118) -- Saturday, February 21 2004, 02:27 am this was a bad ass poem |
| heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Saturday, February 21 2004, 02:32 am thanx again.lol.im glad u like them -heaven |
| Sara (24.11.118.59) -- Saturday, February 28 2004, 11:15 pm Damn ur good damn i wish i could write that good! |
| heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Saturday, February 28 2004, 11:20 pm sara,im sure u could write better then me if u found something to write about that u knew and lived through. |
| xx (172.169.33.99) -- Sunday, February 29 2004, 05:39 am and this done more then that it took mine out and give it back to me i lost someone once and this reminded me of her but its a good thing to be reminded of lost loves:) |
| heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Monday, March 1 2004, 11:41 pm im sorry to hear about that.and if i touched u in some way then i am glad...thank you for the support-heaven |
| xx (172.154.157.88) -- Tuesday, March 2 2004, 01:40 pm theres nothing to be sorry about she is in a better place away from all the pain of this world the past is to learn from not to live in.... if you learn something from loss and pain then there is no loss |
| heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Wednesday, March 3 2004, 02:04 am yes...but i know the pain of losing some one you love,i still havent gotten over my loss...but if you have then you are a way stronger person then i am or ever will be....good luck in everything-heaven |
| xx (172.160.206.216) -- Wednesday, March 3 2004, 06:46 pm i dont hink anyone every gets over loseing anyone they loved |
| heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Thursday, March 4 2004, 03:41 am yes i know...maybe 1 day tho.... |
| Terrie* (65.150.170.81) -- Thursday, March 4 2004, 09:12 am we all have this inner feeling that connects us all to pain and suffering, we develope the empathy to relate to others feelings and sufferings it also enhances our capacity for compassion towards/for others...we very seldom get over a loss of a loved one.the paon is too over whelming....we all try not to think of death before and after it happens because it just seems so final... ( we are promised everlasting life after death, once again we will meet) we are never prepared for any type of death .we do however...though after an extended period of time learn to accept that loss. the pain remains...thank you so much for such a lovely poem that releases what we feel/think about those that we may possibly one day leave behind....great writing.... Terrie* |
| heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Friday, March 5 2004, 01:58 am im glad that every1 agrees with what i have to say,and i hope 1 day we will all get over are loss of those we love untill then i wish every1 the best of luck...and thank you very much for reading my poem-heaven |
| chivo (65.146.229.103) -- Wednesday, March 10 2004, 07:11 pm that is tight. |
| heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Wednesday, March 10 2004, 11:59 pm thanx alot im glad u liked it...peace-heaven |
| barb (66.46.241.176) -- Saturday, March 13 2004, 05:34 am this was a very feeling poem,to write about the way the victim feels shows that you are very compassionate. nice work. very talented and in touch with others feelings. |
| XoForeverXo (24.75.7.209) -- Sunday, March 14 2004, 07:13 am i decided to comment on ur awesome poem like the million people above me!!! I wont probably come back to this exact page...lol but.... who knows...GREAT POEM!!>.. im sorry i died |
| heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Sunday, March 14 2004, 07:47 pm lol.thank you very much....i like ur comment the most out of them all.u make me laugh..thanx-heaven |
| will (69.148.134.233) -- Friday, March 19 2004, 10:43 pm really good writting. |
| kathy (10.113.44.122) -- Friday, March 26 2004, 08:16 pm omg that was so nice and i'll read more when i can |
| Kate (71.115.16.32) -- Saturday, April 15 2006, 08:36 pm that was good it makes me think of my family and friends dieing. |
| heather (74.195.49.16) -- Saturday, April 21 2007, 01:52 am how sweet this is the kind i like |
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