Eternal Love
26 June, 2002
Author: Pamela O'Brien
Like the pedal of a rose;
It will always return.
Like the flame of a candle;
It will always burn.
Like the hope for all eternity;
It is neverending.
Like the brutal truth;
It means never pretending.
Like your greatest fear;
It will always haunt you.
Like the smallest tear;
Ir can get you through.
Like the apple of your eye;
It is the center of your world.
Like the finest wine;
It can intoxicate a girl.
In love, the foresaken is not the past.
It is that which lingers and makes it last.
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| B.R.H. (63.75.26.178) -- Saturday, July 20 2002, 08:58 pm Wonderful poetic flow. This poem not only says the right things it just feels right too.. What a great reflection on Love.... Good work! |
| Seizure (67.34.133.73) -- Saturday, July 20 2002, 10:16 pm I'm with becky here in saying this one flows perfectly and has very deep meaning to it. I enjoyed reading it. |
| Pamela (199.216.176.5) -- Saturday, July 20 2002, 11:32 pm "Poetic flow", I like the sounds of that....LOL Thanks guys, means alot to hear that you like it too :o) |
| you just wish you knew... (134.84.127.20) -- Thursday, September 12 2002, 05:27 pm beside the fact that pedal should be spelled petal....good poem....so yeah...that's all |
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